Now I know EVERY girl has a crush. Wellll I do have a crush his name is Tavon. He is gorgeous,but all girls like him even Sadia. Storie tries to make me talk to him sometimes. Each time I run and say "stop playin." then she start laughin. Now what I dont get is all the riches must be gold diggers because Tavon is rich and they not. So if he go broke like them they gone think he ugly. Me I dont care if rich or poor he is just amazing. One he can play basket ball better than MichealJordan. Two he so real if you hang out with him you cant tell he rich cause he so down to earth.Three he loves animals just like me.
Of course you'd tink the riches would have mad followers but they only got 2. Amanda and Romona. Romona ALWAYS ALWAYS look ragidy. Amanda is just plain ugly. I can say this all to Storie but I cant say it to them. Its not that im a punk its that I dont want to fight. Sadia no the other hand ooooo I wanna but Storie will be mad and then thats that.
The other day Storie came over to my house. We was baking cookies talking bout boys even Tavon. Storie has a boyfriend so she don t like Tavon she just think he cute. His name is Marquis he is not even that cute but she is crazy over him. What she dont know is that he is cheating on her. Last week I saw him and Sadia so called friend making out on the stairs. They didnt even notice I was there until I sneezed.Stupid alergies. Sadia nearly chased around the school till she caught me. She said she would kill me cause she loves him. I wanna tell Storie but she really killed someone one time.
Thursday, May 20, 2010
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
outline
I. introduction
A. the setting is in school ps 146.
B. the main character is Kareem.
C. Kareem will change in ways you can't imagine.
II. rising action
A. Kareem will fight more and get alot of detentions
B. Kareem wants to be teased less.She wants this cause it herts her.She cares about her best friend.
III. climax
A. The most important part is when Kareem changes her attitude.
B. The turning point is when she realizes it dosent matter what people say.
IV. falling action
A. She has no more friends.
B. Her reaction is that she loves herself
V. resolustion
A. Kareem learns that fighting isnt the answer.It affects her because now she dosent get in trouble as much.
B. She starts making friends the right way.Kareem will behave and do her work.
A. the setting is in school ps 146.
B. the main character is Kareem.
C. Kareem will change in ways you can't imagine.
II. rising action
A. Kareem will fight more and get alot of detentions
B. Kareem wants to be teased less.She wants this cause it herts her.She cares about her best friend.
III. climax
A. The most important part is when Kareem changes her attitude.
B. The turning point is when she realizes it dosent matter what people say.
IV. falling action
A. She has no more friends.
B. Her reaction is that she loves herself
V. resolustion
A. Kareem learns that fighting isnt the answer.It affects her because now she dosent get in trouble as much.
B. She starts making friends the right way.Kareem will behave and do her work.
Tuesday, April 20, 2010
First Chapter
Hi my name is Kareem Chanel Morance.I live with my mother who I love very much and my sisters. I go visit my dad every once in a while. OMG!!!!!!!! I am such a daddys girl. I love him and my fams but I cant talk them about personal stuff you know.
Thats why I have my bestie Storie. Were so close were like sisters,twins even. I love her like family and so does my own family. I talk to her about everything. Even about the riches.
These girls think they cute but they but they not. Storie is my bestie but she hangs out with them some times. Which I dont get, I mean they curse at and they disrespect her yet she talks to them. Theres just this one girl named Sadia who just wanna smack one good time so she will leave me alone cause she keeps teasing me.
Oh yea did I forget to mention Im kind of heavy what people call fat. Sadia teases me about it when she is not much lighter than me. Than there are her followers Tamika and Kalissa. I really don't under stand why Kalissa hangs around them. They make fun of ha right in ha face.
Sadia think she all that in a bag of chips which shes not. She say stuff bout always touching my stuff like I said before I jus wanna slap her. My mom drives so when we get in front of my school I ask if I could go with her, but then she ask me why then I jus leave. i dont want to tell her about the test cause im kind of shy. I think when I tell her that she'll talk to the principal then its a whole mess.
At my school you can't fight or you get suspended which is not cool wit my momma. She would beat my butt so bad you woudnt see me for a while till the brusies went way. When I was walkin to my grandmothers house wit Storie she wanted to wait for the riches. I was thinkin bout leavin her but shes my best friend so I waited. So we walkin and Im mad cause I was walkin with the riches who are punks and dont want to talk about me in my face.
So Sadia starts some mess that wasnt needed. Soooooo Im like stop talkin bout me before I smack you. Sadia says " so slap me so slap me" so I walk over to her and smack her. Then she smack me back. Befor I coul do anything Storie came over and held me back. then we stood there and waited for them to walk ahead.
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Thats why I have my bestie Storie. Were so close were like sisters,twins even. I love her like family and so does my own family. I talk to her about everything. Even about the riches.
These girls think they cute but they but they not. Storie is my bestie but she hangs out with them some times. Which I dont get, I mean they curse at and they disrespect her yet she talks to them. Theres just this one girl named Sadia who just wanna smack one good time so she will leave me alone cause she keeps teasing me.
Oh yea did I forget to mention Im kind of heavy what people call fat. Sadia teases me about it when she is not much lighter than me. Than there are her followers Tamika and Kalissa. I really don't under stand why Kalissa hangs around them. They make fun of ha right in ha face.
Sadia think she all that in a bag of chips which shes not. She say stuff bout always touching my stuff like I said before I jus wanna slap her. My mom drives so when we get in front of my school I ask if I could go with her, but then she ask me why then I jus leave. i dont want to tell her about the test cause im kind of shy. I think when I tell her that she'll talk to the principal then its a whole mess.
At my school you can't fight or you get suspended which is not cool wit my momma. She would beat my butt so bad you woudnt see me for a while till the brusies went way. When I was walkin to my grandmothers house wit Storie she wanted to wait for the riches. I was thinkin bout leavin her but shes my best friend so I waited. So we walkin and Im mad cause I was walkin with the riches who are punks and dont want to talk about me in my face.
So Sadia starts some mess that wasnt needed. Soooooo Im like stop talkin bout me before I smack you. Sadia says " so slap me so slap me" so I walk over to her and smack her. Then she smack me back. Befor I coul do anything Storie came over and held me back. then we stood there and waited for them to walk ahead.
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Thursday, April 15, 2010
My Novel Pitch
This novel "The Hard Life" is mostly for middle school kids. Kareem is 12 in 6th she goes to P.S 146. Kareem is kind of heavy set. So she gets teased alot and she only has one friend her best friend "Storie." Now shes sick of all the teasing and ready to stand up for herself. Soon she become mean and self centered. No one talks to Kareem not even her best friend Storie. What has she done? Can she fix this?
This novel "The Hard Life" is mostly for middle school kids. Kareem is 12 in 6th she goes to P.S 146. Kareem is kind of heavy set. So she gets teased alot and she only has one friend her best friend "Storie." Now shes sick of all the teasing and ready to stand up for herself. Soon she become mean and self centered. No one talks to Kareem not even her best friend Storie. What has she done? Can she fix this?
Tuesday, February 2, 2010
Article review
Reader's Response
#3 I think orangs feel threatened by extinction because if people knew how smart orangs are and probally stop trying to kidnap them and take them to zoos where they wont be happy.They are also threatened because people distory there homes. Humans take the wood that they sleep in that also use to shade them selves.If they dont have trees that hold there food they will die of starvation. and because of this that why orangs are going extinct.
#4 Galdikas is motivated by Louis Leakey because she 1 he is in spiered by her and 2 she spent her time with nonhuman primates.What also shows she was motivated was that she and her assistant act as foster parents for the orangs for as long as 8 years. This is how long the mother takes care of theire infants.
Writer's Response
#3 I think the writer started with the misfourtanes of th orangs because they wanted to work with writing order cause and effect. So they started with how bad the orangs have it. To how things got better.
#3 I think orangs feel threatened by extinction because if people knew how smart orangs are and probally stop trying to kidnap them and take them to zoos where they wont be happy.They are also threatened because people distory there homes. Humans take the wood that they sleep in that also use to shade them selves.If they dont have trees that hold there food they will die of starvation. and because of this that why orangs are going extinct.
#4 Galdikas is motivated by Louis Leakey because she 1 he is in spiered by her and 2 she spent her time with nonhuman primates.What also shows she was motivated was that she and her assistant act as foster parents for the orangs for as long as 8 years. This is how long the mother takes care of theire infants.
Writer's Response
#3 I think the writer started with the misfourtanes of th orangs because they wanted to work with writing order cause and effect. So they started with how bad the orangs have it. To how things got better.
Tuesday, January 5, 2010
hw # 67&69
Jordan
1-5-10
My Future Year
I think it will be different because my grades will get higher. Also I think in September I will see some old friends from my other school. I'll get to know my way threw the school. Get more involved after school activities. Become friendly with other teachers and students. Also to try and get my homework done and really try on projects. I also hope to get more projects from other subjects. I want to get my grade up in ELA and dance.
At home I think I will watch less t.v. but stay on the computer more. Become less lazy. Also I think I will work out more . I also think I will get to see my father more often. And get used to my sister being at college =( .Also to get in less troubel. I also hope to start babysiting for the people in my building. I also want a dog (not gonna happen)or turtle. Thats what I think is going to happen.
HAPPY NEW YEAR =)
1-5-10
My Future Year
I think it will be different because my grades will get higher. Also I think in September I will see some old friends from my other school. I'll get to know my way threw the school. Get more involved after school activities. Become friendly with other teachers and students. Also to try and get my homework done and really try on projects. I also hope to get more projects from other subjects. I want to get my grade up in ELA and dance.
At home I think I will watch less t.v. but stay on the computer more. Become less lazy. Also I think I will work out more . I also think I will get to see my father more often. And get used to my sister being at college =( .Also to get in less troubel. I also hope to start babysiting for the people in my building. I also want a dog (not gonna happen)or turtle. Thats what I think is going to happen.
HAPPY NEW YEAR =)
Monday, December 21, 2009
hw # 63 part one
Jordan 603 12-18-09
Read And Response # 1
After the fight Mamma comes wondering what the noise was about. Beanetha wouldn't tell so Ruth. Mamma got mad and told them to stop talking about. Then she gets in Ruths buisness telling Ruth to feed Travis food that is hot. Ruth gets annoyed. So when Beanetha gets back they start to talk about marrige.
Read And Response # 1
After the fight Mamma comes wondering what the noise was about. Beanetha wouldn't tell so Ruth. Mamma got mad and told them to stop talking about. Then she gets in Ruths buisness telling Ruth to feed Travis food that is hot. Ruth gets annoyed. So when Beanetha gets back they start to talk about marrige.
The next day Ruth goes to the doctor. Mamma and Beanetha are at home cleaning. Then Beanetha gets phone call from friend. The friend who likes her and ask to come with gift and she says yes. When Ruth gets back they find out that she is pregnant. Since they don't have much space they are all a little bit happy and sad .Right after Ruth gets back he gets there the gift is records and a wrap that people from his country wear.
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