Thursday, May 20, 2010

Chapter 2

Now I know EVERY girl has a crush. Wellll I do have a crush his name is Tavon. He is gorgeous,but all girls like him even Sadia. Storie tries to make me talk to him sometimes. Each time I run and say "stop playin." then she start laughin. Now what I dont get is all the riches must be gold diggers because Tavon is rich and they not. So if he go broke like them they gone think he ugly. Me I dont care if rich or poor he is just amazing. One he can play basket ball better than MichealJordan. Two he so real if you hang out with him you cant tell he rich cause he so down to earth.Three he loves animals just like me.


Of course you'd tink the riches would have mad followers but they only got 2. Amanda and Romona. Romona ALWAYS ALWAYS look ragidy. Amanda is just plain ugly. I can say this all to Storie but I cant say it to them. Its not that im a punk its that I dont want to fight. Sadia no the other hand ooooo I wanna but Storie will be mad and then thats that.

 The other day Storie came over to my house. We was baking cookies talking bout boys even Tavon. Storie has a boyfriend so she don t like Tavon she just think he cute. His name is Marquis he is not even that cute but she is crazy over him. What she dont know is that he is cheating on her. Last week I saw him and Sadia so called friend making out on the stairs. They didnt even notice I was there until I sneezed.Stupid alergies. Sadia nearly chased around the school till she caught me. She said she would kill me cause she loves him. I wanna tell Storie but she really killed someone one time.

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

outline

I.  introduction

A.  the setting is in school ps 146.
B.  the main character is Kareem.
C.  Kareem will change in ways you can't imagine.

II.  rising action

A.  Kareem will fight more and get alot of detentions
B.  Kareem wants to be teased less.She wants this cause it herts her.She cares about her best friend.

III.  climax


A.  The most important part is when Kareem changes her attitude.
B.  The turning point is when she realizes it dosent matter what people say.


IV.  falling action


A.  She has no more friends.
B.  Her reaction is that she loves herself


V.  resolustion


A.  Kareem learns that fighting isnt the answer.It affects her because now she dosent get in trouble as much.
B.  She starts making friends the right way.Kareem will behave and do her work.