Jordan 603
FDA 12-14-09
Read And Response
Ida B
So far the book is about a girl named Ida B she lives with her mom and dad. One day Ida goes out to play by the water and apple trees. When her parents go to work she goes out to play with the dog. She gets to the spot where she makes rafts. With the raft she writes notes hoping the raft will reach Canada. Since she wants them to respond she puts her address.
But one day her teacher gets the note(but she doesnt live in Canada). So she makes the class research Canada. Ida thinks it's boring.While she is with the trees she talks to them. That day every body is quiet. This makes her mad. So one tree tells her that something bad is going to happen.But the tree that told her is always lying.
1 comment:
Jordan-
Good job, but make sure you're writing analysis in your second paragraph and using to one of the 16 prompts I gave you at the beginning of the year.
Mr. Enders
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